By Kris Anderson,
I would like to start off with a sidebar and say, sorry Professor, but it’s really, really hard to compose a thoughtful blog with Sportscenter on just 10 feet away. Which is actually quite a distance at this hour, plus its not Stuart Scott tonight so there might be some actual information instead of beating into the ground exactly how cool the other side of the pillow is…
The quick-and-dirty one-liners for the week:
- Get to the point!
- There is a difference between hypoallergenic and hyper-allergenic (it’s a compound word and thus a compound link, click on both in succession)
- Remember that journalists write for mass audiences
- Don’t Use the hortative
- “Your job as a writer, you write, then you spend more time revising.” Professor Greene
- “That’s your job, to get rid of stuff, because when you get rid of it you make it better.” – Prof. G
- Readers now prefer multiple points of entry for a story; sidebars, pictures and captions, etc.
- “That’s your job, to get rid of stuff, because when you get rid of it you make it better.” – P.G
- “Journalists love conflict.” - P.G. (The world is flat…so there)
Anyway, it’s been a busy week and a half, we turned two papers, had them publicly blasted and caught a poor reference librarian completely off-guard. This session between blog’s was also kinda like a sort word(s)-of-the-week lesson. Dualiaty, Hortative, a discussion/debate about allergenic’s. Specifically, Professor G. used the word ‘germane’ a total of eight times. That’s five times last Wednesday, and three on Monday. So, germane means what now?

or…

or…

But seriously, pay attention, you can find the definition here.
Now, considering the definition, it would be germane to mention the overwhelming theme from the demolitions of our papers this week: get to the point! With almost every paper, Usenet and the library paper included, Greene stressed the need to bring important information to the top of the article.
A note for those wondering how our semester is going to end, the G-man talked about a three-way…haha, sorta. We will go through three stages of study before an event: first, some internet research, then actually attending the event, and lastly turning in the paper. This doesn’t include however the public humiliation involved with article critiques. But for his own defense, the G-man said “Love me or hate me, that’s what I do best,” he pined, “Mention the point in the lead, and the reader should understand it by the fourth or fifth paragraph.”
Good to know…and for the last significant main point from the week, readers are like deer:

“Goddamit the deer are back!” the G-meister said, “they eat everything a little bit everyday. They nibble, readers nibble a little bit from each story until they find something they want to eat more of. You’ve got to make sure that your story is well digested.”
So stay strong,
, under P.G. paper shredding sessions …and if we keep the
faith, the Golden State Warriors (because we all love them so dearly) might actually win a game…if you cross your fingers really hard…and pray…a lot.